If they had their own brand, they wouldn't have to go to the mascara store every other day.
Earl: So, Jasdevi, did you kill those guys I asked you to kill this morning? Devit: Er, you see, we, uh-- Jasdero: No, but we went to the mascara store! :D
(It has to be an entire store devoted to mascara because of high demand in the DGray universe. See also: the Bookman, Miranda, Anita, etc.)
I tend to like villains in the first place, unless they're Just Too Evil. Hoshino's good at making the villains evil, powerful (to a certain point), and hella creepy while still being somehow sympathetic. Tiki is the best example. I hope we get more Noahs and Noah info! And flashbacks. Lots of flashbacks. Unless said flashback involves Devit being blond.
Oh, thanks for clarifying. It's supposed to be post-Noah, pre-series Jasdevi. I can see now how the first sentence could come across as referring to a mysterious post-ark power-up or something. If I changed it to "Jasdero and Devit are stronger than they were as normal humans." would that be sufficient? I already know I use too many adverbs, so there's something I can work on when it comes to the sentence level. :D
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Date: 2008-08-19 11:49 am (UTC)Earl: So, Jasdevi, did you kill those guys I asked you to kill this morning?
Devit: Er, you see, we, uh--
Jasdero: No, but we went to the mascara store! :D
(It has to be an entire store devoted to mascara because of high demand in the DGray universe. See also: the Bookman, Miranda, Anita, etc.)
I tend to like villains in the first place, unless they're Just Too Evil. Hoshino's good at making the villains evil, powerful (to a certain point), and hella creepy while still being somehow sympathetic. Tiki is the best example. I hope we get more Noahs and Noah info! And flashbacks. Lots of flashbacks. Unless said flashback involves Devit being blond.
Oh, thanks for clarifying. It's supposed to be post-Noah, pre-series Jasdevi. I can see now how the first sentence could come across as referring to a mysterious post-ark power-up or something. If I changed it to "Jasdero and Devit are stronger than they were as normal humans." would that be sufficient? I already know I use too many adverbs, so there's something I can work on when it comes to the sentence level. :D