Thanks for the thoughts! I also like that aspect of the Noah Clan. I adore characters who're evil bastards but feel love/loyalty to someone. With the Noah Clan you get a lot of said characters, all at once. No way are they good--despite the title, DGray doesn't have much moral ambiguity--they're bastards out to destroy the world AND they care about each other. I love you, moral ambiguity!
Was it hard to grasp the meaning because of... subtlety (?), or would you recommend rewriting for clarity? Usually the fics sit around in Word for a long time, getting line-edited at least, but this one was different. I'm happy you like it, and thank you. :D Must get better at writing, though....
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Thanks for the thoughts! I also like that aspect of the Noah Clan. I adore characters who're evil bastards but feel love/loyalty to someone. With the Noah Clan you get a lot of said characters, all at once. No way are they good--despite the title, DGray doesn't have much moral ambiguity--they're bastards out to destroy the world AND they care about each other. I love you, moral ambiguity!
Was it hard to grasp the meaning because of... subtlety (?), or would you recommend rewriting for clarity? Usually the fics sit around in Word for a long time, getting line-edited at least, but this one was different. I'm happy you like it, and thank you. :D Must get better at writing, though....